the kick does not match with the synth used for this, there needs to be more layers, and init synths do not sound good when mashed together like how you did, not a chord, but just two notes at the same time.
Fix the cuts that appear in it, and make it longer than 50 seconds, add more: bass, drums, variation, synths, melodies etc.
that description line sounds like something that i'd hear on c.ai ngl lmao
the genre is not breakcore as you've listen in ur tags
the instruments need to be mixed
It's too repetitive
well it was my second song ever and most of the mixing my friend did
the breakcore tag was added because my friend keep saying it was breakcore so I just thought it was
needs more mixing, the instrumental is too repetitive, the drums are not mixed w the piano, and the piano needs more variation than just 2 notes
dude...what is this...
I don’t know…
it's okay but here's what i can advice w my lo-fi experience:
1. the song is TOO repetitive
2. the song is too short
3. lower the hi-hat a little
4. place the kick w the snare
5. add fills
6. add percussions
7. add more stuff, lo-fi isnt just piano, pads and drums
i didnt even try to make lo-fi bro
genre isnt techno, and there is no mixing.. which is a big flaw, the piano isnt on tune w the song too imo, and its rlly repetitive
Ok sry I'm just learning chill, I don't know much yet and I didn't know what genre it was so I just put techno I didn't realise it would bother someone so much, btw I just listen to some ur songs there rly good better than mine easily but u can be a bit more positive about it tho
scary forest vibes
rlly love this but i need to confirm u made it..mind sending a screenshot of the project in dms or on discord? User's ropender, thanks!
(asking because I really want to scout you, and ng's facing an AI problem)
I just make music and stuff
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